Please try harder if you actually want people to listen to these.
The beat was too loud compared to the vocals, I was having a hard time hearing what you were actually saying, you need to mumble less and enunciate better, you also need to take the time to breathe more consistently, as often it sounds like you are starting to lose your breath. A good way (I imagine, I don't make music) to avoid mumbling and breathing weirdly is to record and keep rerecording in segments until each segment sounds the way you want it to.
Also, you have no flow. Your speed is inconsistent and your words lack "weight"
Now on to the lyrics. Please post them. I am having trouble understanding what you are saying, but from what I could make out, the lyrics were a bit weird.
@DJ Conyo used things specific to you to insult you with and his lines were tailor made for you, but a lot of the things you say are completely random or completely fictional, which is not how I think a disstrack is supposed to be.
The fact that this was done in a matter of very few hours shows that you could have put more effort into it. You're going to keep facing criticism if you keep churning out low quality songs.
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