No refunds [a cheffz] [th13 distrack]
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@James Davis cop main disstrack = cringetrack
@thehomelessdude no sir, Aaron is representing all the crim mains with his tracks
Got to give it to you it takes balls to even try and do this but not everyone can perfect it. I suggest to practice more and you will do better!SoundCloud - Hear the world’s sounds
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distrack on townhall 13 hope you enjoy
[first time experimenting with censors]
cause he doesn't know how to spell them
speak with ur chest bro, youre mumbling
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@Auris https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S0022103106000825
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I will contact your parents/guardians and inform them of your activities on the interweb.
The censoring ruins the flow of the song, and stops most sentences that have it from making sense in the first place. Instead of continuing to listen to the song, I'm left wondering what was actually meant to be said under the censorship, and I am left behind.
You sound like you're about to botch your lines when singing(?) them.
In addition to that, at 1:41 to 1:45, you actually seemed to have botched your line altogether, yet kept it in? If you didn't botch it, it is completely unintelligible without lyrics.
Your voice is monotonous and mostly devoid of intonation? Your song blurs together after listening to it so many times and is confusing me now. Overall, your lack of emotion degrades the track's quality, and can, to the average listener, easily be found boring.
You can compare this to listening to an angle grinder for 10 hours at 10% volume, it's boring and annoying and something I'd boot out of my playlist very quickly.
You also don't speak clearly enough for the lyrics to be heard normally, a recurring theme in most of your tracks, resulting in having to either listen through multiple times, or read the lyrics off the thread as the song plays.
Not putting effort into it isn't something to brag about, it's literally a negative quality, which portrays a lack of care for the project.
Ultimately, the lack of care that you so proudly boast of only serves to lessen the impact that you so painfully obviously seek to make with all of your tracks. Your tracks hit and bounce off like sawdust as both lyrical planning and execution is pulled off poorly. As a result, most of your tracks are literally forgotten by the end of the day.
At the very least, your "Unfunny" track is much more interesting vocally, considering your monotonous voice isn't as present in that one, even though I can just barely make out what you're saying.
The only impression that's left behind from this one is that of a train wreck. And it's honestly become the norm at this point.
You sound like you're about to botch your lines when singing(?) them.
In addition to that, at 1:41 to 1:45, you actually seemed to have botched your line altogether, yet kept it in? If you didn't botch it, it is completely unintelligible without lyrics.
Your voice is monotonous and mostly devoid of intonation? Your song blurs together after listening to it so many times and is confusing me now. Overall, your lack of emotion degrades the track's quality, and can, to the average listener, easily be found boring.
You can compare this to listening to an angle grinder for 10 hours at 10% volume, it's boring and annoying and something I'd boot out of my playlist very quickly.
You also don't speak clearly enough for the lyrics to be heard normally, a recurring theme in most of your tracks, resulting in having to either listen through multiple times, or read the lyrics off the thread as the song plays.
Not putting effort into it isn't something to brag about, it's literally a negative quality, which portrays a lack of care for the project.
Ultimately, the lack of care that you so proudly boast of only serves to lessen the impact that you so painfully obviously seek to make with all of your tracks. Your tracks hit and bounce off like sawdust as both lyrical planning and execution is pulled off poorly. As a result, most of your tracks are literally forgotten by the end of the day.
At the very least, your "Unfunny" track is much more interesting vocally, considering your monotonous voice isn't as present in that one, even though I can just barely make out what you're saying.
The only impression that's left behind from this one is that of a train wreck. And it's honestly become the norm at this point.
