Song choice is nice and all in all its good to see not as well known players making a name for themselfs and making montages etc. The montage is good quality, you've included humorous clips which is nice and you arent terrible at shooting. However to improve footage in general i would say shorten the shooting clips down into the kills and not so much the 5 second buildup etc. Also regarding the game play, try and aim a bit higher, atm it seem you like to aim for the legs which everyone is / used to be guilty of, if you try aim more for the chest/head you'll be surprised how much you improve. Apart from that i would love to see more from you.