So far

[Illuminathan]

So far I've made this, but I'm not at all happy about it...
Can I get your opinion?

Obs: I know there is a long part in the end where there is nothing, but that's the time I it to be and haven't filled it with videos yet.

 

[jay_]

My immersion was ruined by your FPS counter.

 

[Henk]

What is this? A PLPD showcase/trailer with shitty rap music? I'd suggest choosing other music.

 

[rogue]

i think you should consider using sans serif in your narration scenes instead of the posh serif font, just a suggestion

 

[Aquaa]

A city controlled by real gangsters? Hahahahah its a bunch of fat virgins who get shoved into lockers nathan.

im only kidding.... or am I? seriously tho remove that its a fucking joke

 

[Itzryzo]

if you need more clips
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCIx811F34qQttSbula0BX_w

 

[The HitMan]

Mini chase from this point onward if you want to use it. Looking good so far.

 

[Kenty]

0:51 , thanks for including my clip. Great stuff for now, music change would be nice and try to get clips without FPS counters in the top left. The little black movie maker narrative clips need to just go. Keep working at it and it will turn out just fine in the end.

 

[Taylor]

Heyyyyy a lot of my clips are hereeee

 

[Illuminathan]

Heyyyyy a lot of my clips are hereeee

https://gyazo.com/bc760f7b4f16899f24ba9d7efb130fee

 

[andreW]

https://gyazo.com/bc760f7b4f16899f24ba9d7efb130fee

Who is this tylor and sophia?

 

[Taylor]

me