Paralake for beginners.

[Philip]

Short video about paralake.
And sorry for spelling mistakes, but it was early in the morning when i made it.

 

[John Daymon]

Very nice guide of the buildings of Paralake, I would try to correct the spelling mistakes, but again nice guide

 

[sjappy10]

Nice work! I am sure beginners can use this guide good, its verry usefull!

 

[galactacus_jones]

Nice concept. If you want some suggestions, first of all you should fix the spelling errors as people have mentioned before.
If you want to make it look nicer, you could choose a less generic font, possibly zooming in on the pictures and making the camera move from one side of the screen to the other. If you're using Sony Vegas, the 'Warm Vignette' effect adds a nice touch.