The Mayhem of Paralake (Cringe)

[MegaFro]

So I was playing at 2-3 AM and a full on chaos started.

INB4 Cringe rating


But seriously, please give some actual feedback rather then "ew cringe", I want to improve.

 

[Itzryzo]

Turn down the audio a bit, apart from that though it was well edited and the clips were fun to watch.
Good job.

 

[Slayerduck]

INB4 Cringe rating

But seriously, please give some actual feedback rather then "ew cringe", I want to improve.

I cringed at Jon storing his gun under SWAT gunpoint during the bank thing, the rest of the video is entertaining doe. Good job

 

[b.flemming29]

Was surprised by the video, good job, maybe turn the audio down a little though, seriously though decent little video!

 

[MachineGunO]

ew cringe

 

[Medium]

Like everyone else said, we shat ourself when the audio suddenly exploded. Make all the audio the same unless you need to highlight something.

Other than that, great video.

I wonder if anyone will make an AR on that Jon guy.

 

[Weazel]

I was on TV

 

[Esteban]

Points where you can improve:

• The title font and that stuff really puts me off.(Don't want people to think that from the beginning). Use something more neutral and nice.
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• The overlapping clips at 0:17 isn't very pleasing. Make the transition a bit smoother, and make the clips last a little longer.
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• Obviously fix the volume part. Really scared the shit out of me.'
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• 0:43, Don't make the viewer wait for 20 seconds with a blank screen. If you want to create suspense, try adding something to hype the viewer. A blank screen will most likely just put them off and make them close the video.

Apart from these points, It's a nice video. Interesting, and the music is nicely chosen.

Just work on these things, and I'm sure you will make some dank stuff.

 

[JER]

DAMN DUDE SIK AIM!!! Subsctibed

 

[Generic Twat]

I gotta say, I under estimated you Mega, I take back my shit talkery. It's a fun video, keep it up.