The Reno Family

[Jack P]

The Reno Family Applications: Open

A little about The Reno Family:
This is The Reno Family, a organisation maked for many things, the most important thing for us is to teamwork. Treaters will not be tolurated and will be shot proberly, they can also get hunted out of the city or something else, it's different and it's different who do it.

Organisation Rules:
1. Do not steal from other members.
2. If you be police try to stay out for raiding us if we growing weed and the others do.
3. Do not shoot anyone in our organisation.
4. Always teamwork in the organisation if needed.
5. Listen to the higher ranks.
6. Do not raid other members in the organisation.
7. You need the know the rules in perpheads.


Ranks:

Leaders:
Oliver Jorgensen
Luca Reno

Head Leaders:

Sergeants:

Police Dealers:

Advisors:

Soldiers:

Trainees:
Mathias Hedegaard.


The applications can be maked here:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/15e...98&entry.2132472056&fbzx=-7725450324212062000

 

[Marxxman_]

Just a few tips:

Fix up that dodgy ranking system as it makes no sense.
Get better, less dumb rules (Someone had to say it).
If someone is police and they do not do their job (by raiding you), then they are technically breaking the rules (They need to do their job even if they're in some bloody organisation).
Saying that you need to know the rules whilst in a list of rules is a bit weird and it's common sense to know the rules anyways.
Fix up that horrible bad spelling (If there's a little red line under a word, it means that it's spelled wrong).
Try and put just a tad bit more effort in and don't use that black font (Some of us here use the Dark Core).
Give us some more information about the org.

Jesus, I sound like someone reviewing a fucking Enforcer Application (WhiteWolf, lol).

Anyways.. Best of luck..

(Get more originality, nerds).
(jk luv u (not really))...