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Yea so, made a new video. It was a video of which I was commissioned IC to create which, I haven't gotten the "OK" that it's exactly as he wanted. It's subject to change or even a whole ass new video which I'll make an update for if that's the case. Anyway, into the stuff.
So, as I was writing this new piece, I was taught a new concept which was "Syllable Counting". Basically, it's just me counting the syllables in a bar so that it properly fits into the song. I only learned about the concept like, after the whole thing was basically done so I wasn't able to implement it into the song but I figured I'd just implement it into another song later. It's the reason why all my songs sound so rushed or just straight up don't sound right. It's not just the equipment I have although that is one of the reasons. I have a lot to work on, ok?!?!?!
Anyway, here is that fire ass banger that I was working on for a few days. It was commissioned by @DarkSapling . Hope ya'll enjoy it.
Feel free to leave a comment on my little forums corner in the "internet" section of the forums. It'll be really helpful if you could do that so more people can come in and take a look. I'm trying to do more commissions/videos so that I can get better with my writing/delivery and what not.
[lyrics]
I can't turn water into wine
but I can turn you into mine
we draw lines arounds ourselves
because we don't need nobody else
I'm telling you just send it all hell
-----------------
cause what the hell are we doing this for unless it's just us
y'know?
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Best foot forward
All feet in
This whip is going on a ride
with no foreseen end
lets pretend for a moment
we bought a dog
we got a kid
we just bought a house with that white picket fence
life grandee
we just gotta stand through all the greasy burger stands
it sounds really dumb but it's a mystery I no longer feel numb
I'm a mystery
you're a mystery
except you're really mystery
the rest is history
cause all I know is I'm really in love with you
I gotta keep my cool
cause I'm head over heels in love with you
and that's the truth so don't confuse it with anything else
I feel like someone else
the knowledgment of self is really something to behold of
Cause if I didn't know any better I'd really wanna be your love
We got this far
As we are
As Below
So Above
I'm in love
----------------------
I'm in love
I'm in love
I'm in love (repeats until done)
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is this enough?
is this enough?
do you see my heart enough?
cause I don't think words are enough...
So, as I was writing this new piece, I was taught a new concept which was "Syllable Counting". Basically, it's just me counting the syllables in a bar so that it properly fits into the song. I only learned about the concept like, after the whole thing was basically done so I wasn't able to implement it into the song but I figured I'd just implement it into another song later. It's the reason why all my songs sound so rushed or just straight up don't sound right. It's not just the equipment I have although that is one of the reasons. I have a lot to work on, ok?!?!?!
Anyway, here is that fire ass banger that I was working on for a few days. It was commissioned by @DarkSapling . Hope ya'll enjoy it.
Feel free to leave a comment on my little forums corner in the "internet" section of the forums. It'll be really helpful if you could do that so more people can come in and take a look. I'm trying to do more commissions/videos so that I can get better with my writing/delivery and what not.
[lyrics]
I can't turn water into wine
but I can turn you into mine
we draw lines arounds ourselves
because we don't need nobody else
I'm telling you just send it all hell
-----------------
cause what the hell are we doing this for unless it's just us
y'know?
-------------------------------------------------
Best foot forward
All feet in
This whip is going on a ride
with no foreseen end
lets pretend for a moment
we bought a dog
we got a kid
we just bought a house with that white picket fence
life grandee
we just gotta stand through all the greasy burger stands
it sounds really dumb but it's a mystery I no longer feel numb
I'm a mystery
you're a mystery
except you're really mystery
the rest is history
cause all I know is I'm really in love with you
I gotta keep my cool
cause I'm head over heels in love with you
and that's the truth so don't confuse it with anything else
I feel like someone else
the knowledgment of self is really something to behold of
Cause if I didn't know any better I'd really wanna be your love
We got this far
As we are
As Below
So Above
I'm in love
----------------------
I'm in love
I'm in love
I'm in love (repeats until done)
--------------
is this enough?
is this enough?
do you see my heart enough?
cause I don't think words are enough...
