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Another update before we get to it.
Things haven't been going all too well for myself. There's been a lot of delays, mental roadblocks and issues going on in my life. I ended up getting my mic cancelled on me and it was refunded but I started to have think about if this was even something I wanted to do. I don't exactly feel all too confident in my ability to write music. I've still been trying though! I've been trying as hard as I could honestly to deal with my mental road blocks and motivate myself to write stuff. It's not so easy to just say "gunna write now". I have to be thinking on a subject that matters to me. Which leads to to today's video. I wrote it a couple of hours ago and I tried my best to implement that one trick that this cool dude from the community showed me I forgot who they were but dude is awesome sauce.
Basically, I'm just paying attention to the syllables in a bar and properly writing things out so they work well. This is my first attempt at that and I think I did pretty well. I did it on a kinda slow BPM beat though so it was kinda cheating.
Without further distraction, here is that video I made.
[Lyrics]
I know it's hard out there
Take my jacket I swear it's hailing
The old man in the sky is flailing
I wonder why
Does he hate the things that you do to I?
Or that I do like lie and steal and kill
all for the thrill
All for a thought we're our forcing our will
There's a cooler right there
take a seat
Let me tell you my ridiculous fleeting thoughts of the week
It's a dream
like steam that fills THE air of my room
but when I open my door it dissipates flying home to the moon
These are fumes
Why do we abuse each other?
If a child looked on the world they'd be in confusion
ask yourself the question while you listen to music
use this TIME and these RHYMES to promote the usage of your MIND
it should be a crime not to
I designed my words to have moments of emptyness between them
to give you time to think and feel and hear'em
Walk with me while I take you to the promise land
filled with lolipop fields with a bottle of scotch in your hand
I just want to love you
My fellow human
My brother
My sister
Mister IS THIS what was wished for?
Violence and destruction plague a world in need of some lovin'
If this is what was asked for then take me back
I had enough of the pain in my back
These things weigh heavy
They weigh heavy...
Things haven't been going all too well for myself. There's been a lot of delays, mental roadblocks and issues going on in my life. I ended up getting my mic cancelled on me and it was refunded but I started to have think about if this was even something I wanted to do. I don't exactly feel all too confident in my ability to write music. I've still been trying though! I've been trying as hard as I could honestly to deal with my mental road blocks and motivate myself to write stuff. It's not so easy to just say "gunna write now". I have to be thinking on a subject that matters to me. Which leads to to today's video. I wrote it a couple of hours ago and I tried my best to implement that one trick that this cool dude from the community showed me I forgot who they were but dude is awesome sauce.
Basically, I'm just paying attention to the syllables in a bar and properly writing things out so they work well. This is my first attempt at that and I think I did pretty well. I did it on a kinda slow BPM beat though so it was kinda cheating.
Without further distraction, here is that video I made.
[Lyrics]
I know it's hard out there
Take my jacket I swear it's hailing
The old man in the sky is flailing
I wonder why
Does he hate the things that you do to I?
Or that I do like lie and steal and kill
all for the thrill
All for a thought we're our forcing our will
There's a cooler right there
take a seat
Let me tell you my ridiculous fleeting thoughts of the week
It's a dream
like steam that fills THE air of my room
but when I open my door it dissipates flying home to the moon
These are fumes
Why do we abuse each other?
If a child looked on the world they'd be in confusion
ask yourself the question while you listen to music
use this TIME and these RHYMES to promote the usage of your MIND
it should be a crime not to
I designed my words to have moments of emptyness between them
to give you time to think and feel and hear'em
Walk with me while I take you to the promise land
filled with lolipop fields with a bottle of scotch in your hand
I just want to love you
My fellow human
My brother
My sister
Mister IS THIS what was wished for?
Violence and destruction plague a world in need of some lovin'
If this is what was asked for then take me back
I had enough of the pain in my back
These things weigh heavy
They weigh heavy...
