Graphics and effects coming on nicely, but I do have a criticism, the plot seems a bit cliche, the kind of thing you would expect from a low budget horror movie that was only made to squeeze some money out of the genre.
I think you should go more in-depth with the story and plot setting as you progress with developing the game, go back to the drawing board if you have to, some of the best games ever made were delayed heavily simply because of how they felt things weren't unique or wouldn't work, and they started over and ended up making something great. Take a look at the history of Half Life 2's development and you'll see what I mean.
Anyway I wish you good luck with the development of the game and hope you put as much effort as you need to for this project to reach its full potential.