For everyone who "smells post whore", this is MY MACHINIMA THAT I FINISHED TODAY. I CAN POST MY WORK ON THESE FORUMS. My first Machinima. Hope you enjoy .
It's actually pretty decent. I would say fade out the music rather than just stop it. And when you noclip at the start, make that less juttery. And also get a friend to drive the car rather than you doing it and watching via camera. Nice job though.
You need to work on some serious camera work and ragdoll posing, play around, Tip: if you are using a moving cam with noclip, hold left alt to slow your movement
It can help for the camera stuttering. I used it myself for quite alot videos. But other than the camera stuttering, the plot and idea is very nice and original