The Detective Files - A New Start

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Hey guys i have noticed that no-one has thought about typing up a huge storyline for their characters so you will be following the famous detective James Anders. This is purely for your entertainment and if all goes well there could be more enjoy.

Some Characters will be based on characters people made some will not.

Detective James Anders (Main Character)
Officer (Detective in training into the story) James Wolveras (Anders partner)
Lieutenant Thomas George (The Boss Paralake PD)
Lieutenant Luke Person (Evocity PD)
Dispatch (Lives in the radio)
Officer John Daymon (Rambo of the police force)
Detective Dmitrii Ermakov (Latest Addition to the Detectives)
Swiper (Staring as himself)
Officer James Peterson (Always interested in cases)

And a few others that may not have names


Okay lets get on with it



(Dispatch)Dead body has been discovered at bazaar requesting Detective unit over.
(Wolveras)Shall we respond with the power of the Detectives?
(Anders)Lets do it Sunglasses!
Both Detectives put their Aviators on as the Lights and Sirens activate then the Dodge Charger performs a 180 revving its engine to max and speeding off

The Detective Files
A New Start


Chapter 1 From Evocity to Paralake

A police cruiser pulls into the PD parking lot late at night then parks up in one of the bays when its lights and engine switches off. The side of the cruiser has writing saying Detective Anders DE1 the door opens as a officer steps out closing the door.
(Anders) My last shift for Evocity I will miss this city
The officer shuts the door then walks inside the building to a office with no lights on at all.
(Anders) And there was me thinking everyone was on a night shift.
The office is completely deserted no life can be seen at all
(Anders) Hello anyone home or are you all stuck in the evidence locker again?
The lights suddenly flick on as officers from all desks leap out of cover yelling "Suprise"
(Persons) Detective Anders you are the best officer I have seen here it is a shame to see you go so we want to make the most of you.
(Anders) Are you going to turn me into that Surgery board game?
(Persons) Last board game we had we ended up calling riot squad on ourselfs.
(Anders) Right well thank you sir Paralake wants me there soon as possible so i think i need to go now.
(Persons) Keep the badge to tell you wherever how far away you are the Evocity PD is with you.
(Anders) Thank you sir
(Persons) Call me Luke I am not your boss anymore.
(Anders) Goodbye Luke goodbye Evocity.
Anders walks out of the office to the rear car park of the PD to find a Dark Blue Mazda RX8 wrapped in police tape.
(Anders) Crime Scene huh?
Anders Tears the police tape off then opens the door putting his seat belt on. The engine starts and the car rolls out of the parking lot towards the interstate.
A sign breaks out from the darkness and reads the following "Paralake the paradise city"
The Mazda pulls off the highway into a suburbs area to a driveway of a house then the lights and engine is turned off. Anders steps out of the car and unlocks the door with a key stepping inside.

A Small note is on a table reading the following
"Welcome to Paralake city your new home your introduction to PLPD will start tomorrow be at the Department at 0730 am Lieutenant Andreas Wiese Paralake PD"

New Chapter you have been waiting for too long.
 
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This Chapter is based on a actual RP situation you may recognize some Characters

Lieutenant Thomas George
The Mayor

Chapter Two First Impressions

*The sun shines as a new day dawns for paralake and all is well until a air horn is heard from the house next door*

(Anders) Whoa that got me up best alarm clock ever!
Anders turns the Radio to smooth Jazz as he makes himself a breakfast of waffles with bananas and toffee
(Anders) Well time to put on the uniform when I am-
There is a knock from the door
(Anders) I am not expecting anyone?
Anders opens up the door as there is a Pistol with a suppressor aimed directly at him
(Thug) Get in now!
(Anders) Easy you got me not!

*Warning DO NOT try this at home*

Anders drags the Thug into a wall and uses some too long to explain kung fu moves then slaps some handcuffs quickly on the Thug.
(Anders) Now then shall we introduce each other?
(Thug) You are dead?
(Anders) Hello you are dead i am Anders
Anders slips on some sunglasses
(Anders) Detective Anders
Click for awesomeness

Anders pulls on his police uniform then checks all of his equipment before turning on the radio

(Anders) Dispatch Transmission good?
(Dispatch) Ten Four Good Transmission
(Anders) I need a prisoner transport for Goldilocks at my house how copy?
The Thug slowly flips him off in pain
(Dispatch) Copy that unit on the way standby for arrival?
(George) Making first impressions on the local gangs?
(Anders) Well there is a few impressions on this guy and they seam to hurt.
(George) Right can you come to PD the mayor needs our help and you are the best man for the job.
(Anders) On the way.
Anders walks outside getting into his Blue Mazda then quickly turning the ignition on then driving off.

Anders opens the door finding Lieutenant Thomas George and the Mayor with his SS.
(Anders) Detective Anders reporting for duty.
(Mayor) Hello Detective pleasure to meet a officer that is not all Judge Dredd.
(Anders) I Dredded that you would say that.
(George) There was a car going after the mayor we got a full description from a officer who will be joining you.
The Door opens as a young officer walks in
(Wolveras) Officer Wolveras reporting I will be your partner Detective Anders.
(Anders) You know what to do?
(Wolveras) Yes I do.
(Anders) Wait at the car I will be there soon.
(George) Officer James Wolveras has been interested in being a Detective you have made quite a impact.
(Anders) Every partner I had is dead.
(George) Cover his butt then dismissed.
The Cruiser starts up with a roar and drives out of the PD.

(Anders) This is a interesting highway
(Wolveras) Big Highway for a big city
(Dispatch) Officer has spotted the suspect vehicle refusing to stop and requesting backup
(Anders) Lets get him!
The Cruisers lights and sirens activate as the cruiser turns rapidly and joins up with the other unit
(Dispatch) Your backup cannot keep up with the suspect good luck speed enforcer will be joining when possible
(Wolveras) Get ahead of him that is the business zone!
The cruiser overtakes the car then suddenly the suspect rams the cruiser causing the back tires to lose traction for a moment, Anders drops the cruiser a gear pulling back behind the suspect then pits the car causing it to lose control and crash into the Mcuwes. The Cruiser roars to a stop close by with both officers bailing out with weapons drawn.
(Wolveras) I got this guy!
(Anders) Securing sweater vest
The Second suspect behind the car draws a weapon and aims at wolveras
(Wolveras) Drop the weapon
(Anders) Two vs one buddy drop it!
The suspect fires 4 times hitting Wolveras and sending him to the floor Anders in reaction fires two shots both hitting the head. Both of the bodies are lying on the ground as the sweater breaks from cover wondering what happened.
(Sweater) Oh no i am not cut out for this!
(Anders) Code Blue Officer down need medic ASAP!
Another cruiser appears with another officer bailing out and firing all of his rounds into the lifeless suspect.
(Daymon) DIE!!!!!!!!!!!
(Anders) Hold your fire he is dead
The hyper officer reloads and empties another magazine into the body.
(Anders) Control your fire stop shooting!
(Daymon) now he is dead can i shoot the ot-
(Anders) No get out of here!
The Ambulance appears and the medic rushes to the downed officer checking his pulse then shaking his head.
(Anders) Dispatch Officer down.
(Dispatch) Medic is almo-
(Anders) He is here he called it.
(George) What happened?
(Mayor) Are you okay?
(Anders) The suspect opened fire he took a officer down with him.
(George) Sorry to hear that return to PD with the passenger.
(Anders) Yeah just *sigh* Give me a moment

End of Chapter 2
 
Good job and well done, I like it. Maybe add some pictures made in sandbox or something to make it more attractive? :)
 
Poll added i need your opinion of what should be in chapter 3
[DOUBLEPOST=1421532822,1421352693][/DOUBLEPOST]Chapter 3 Detective's Detect

Two Minutes after the shootout the paramedic puts the dead officer in a body bag then puts it on a bed on wheels then load it in the ambulance. Detective Anders stands watching the body being put into the ambulance then gets in the cruiser turning the engine on then slowly drives off.

(Dispatch) Detective Anders please report to City Hall.
(Anders) For what reason?
(Mayor) I need you here there has been a development in the police department.
(Anders) On my way code 2
As the cruiser pulls into a parking space Anders spots the Lieutenants cruiser parked close by. The cruiser stops in the parking bay then the engine suddenly stops and the door opens with Anders stepping out. Anders finds a path then follows it ending up inside the city hall, Walking into the elevator he presses a button as the elevator ascends to the top floor. Anders walks out and across the bridge then arrives at a SS Agent who lets him inside.
(Anders) You needed me sir?
(George) We needed you there is a problem.
(Mayor) More and more police are becoming Detectives they need a dedicated leader
(George) Congratulations you are being promoted to Senior Detective.
(George) You also now have a dedicated radio frequency the lines are spammed by constant cases.
(Mayor) Do me proud any questions?
Anders slips on his Sunglasses
(Anders) Only questions i have is for cases.
(George) Go on now take charge of your Detectives
Anders walks out of the room as the two have a conversation
(Mayor) You think he is suitable?
(George) You have a second choice?
(Mayor) Never mind then.

(Anders) All Detectives activate frequency and report in.
(Detectives) Reporting in
(Ermakov) Reporting in am i needed?
(Dispatch) Be Adviced body discovered in suburbs at 10-20 Fredys
(Anders) I want some of you to secure the scene the rest is gathering evidence I will be on scene.
(Detectives) On it
(Ermakov) What about me?
(Anders) Is it true that you are a pilot?
(Ermakov) Yes i am
(Anders) I want you and another Detective to take the Aerial Surveillance unit and scan for that officers cruiser.
(Ermakov) On it
Anders cruiser pulls up to a scene surrounded with Crime Scene tape, Worried Civilians and Media crews.
(Anders) Status?
(Detective) We got the body it is a officer reported to be ticketing a car for illegal parking.
(Anders) Ask any witnesses what happened i need to look at the Tyre marks.
Anders takes out his camera and starts taking snapshots of the marking then from the trunk of his cruiser pulls out a tray with no bottom and a kind of foam. He places the tray so both Tyre marks are inside then he sprays the foam and waits for it to expand then takes it out and puts it in a bigger bag.
(Ermakov) I found the cruiser it is close to a farm.
(Anders) Land there if possible i want you to look for evidence on it.
(Ermakov) Umm this is my first day as a Detective I'm not sure how things work?
(Detective) I can teach him sir.
(Anders) Good lets get to work.
Two hours later all the evidence is collected and the Detectives head back to process it.

(Anders) This badge that was impaled in the cruiser front bumper came from a Chevy Camaro SS And there is blue paint, This seems to match up with the Tyres which are from a Camaro.
(Anders) Detective Ermakov you in the air?
(Ermakov) You want me in the air?
(Anders) Blue Chevy Camaro SS Find it!
(Ermakov) It is getting dark i will try.
(Ermakov) Spotted the car on the Highway heading to Suburbs
(Anders) All units in that area intercept
(Dispatch) All units in the Suburbs area you are to intercept a Blue SS Camaro suspects are involved with the murder of a police officer.
(Daymon) I am in the area ready to intercept!
(Anders) Anders arriving in suburbs!
(Ermakov) In the area and tracking!
(Petersmith) On the way to assist with Speed Enforcement
The Camaro rolls past with its engine roaring as the cops get in position.
(Anders) Spring the trap gogo!
All units converge the Camaro sins around and tries to escape but all paths are blocked as the officers step out weapons drawn. Anders takes out a megaphone from his trunk switching it on and speaking into it.
(Anders) Turns the engine off and step out with your hands in the air.
The Driver complies and turns the engine off stepping out with both hands in the air.
(Driver) I surrender!
(Anders) Secure his car for transport I will take him to PD.
(Anders) All units good work Ermakov return to base.
(Ermakov) Copy heading back.

A few minutes later in interrogation

Anders pushes the suspect into the interrogation room and pushes him down onto the chair.
(Anders) Name
(Thug) Check your mothers contacts list
(Anders) Do not test me you killed a officer.
(Thug) Hey I did not do that man.
Anders suddenly slams a glass of water off the metal desk causing it to shatter.
(Anders) Don't give me that!
(Thug) I swear I did not kill him!
(Anders) That car is not yours is it?
(Thug) Umm
Anders raises his hand to his neck and motions a slicing motion as the camera switches off.
(Anders) Last chance!
(Thug) You going to put me in jail again?
Anders suddenly grabs the chair and hurls it to the Thugs head knocking him to the ground.
(Anders) Who owns the car!
The thug stays quiet then Anders suddenly pushes him to the ground then grabs the chair again and smashes him in the face.
A officer suddenly burst into the room shouting.
(Daymon) Sir let me handle this!
Anders strides out of the room to observation then Daymon grins looking at the Thug.
(Daymon) Answer the questions who owns the car?
The thug is on the ground bleeding from his nose and with a large bruise.
(Daymon) No?
(Thug) No!
Daymon the pull out a knife then *Censored*
A low pitched scream can be heard from the interrogation as the Thug cups his crotch.
Anders looks at the scene in horror wondering how a officer could do this then he realizes it is Daymon.
The Lieutenant burst into the room smacking the officer in the face with the baton then smashes him against the wall.
(George) What do you think you are doing?
(Officer) Medic tend to him!
The Paramedic walks over to the Thug on the floor curled in a ball
(Medic) He sliced of his umm you don't want to know!
Anders appears almost speechless as he looks to the officer.
(Anders) We already have one statue of a testicle we do not need another!

Look at Chapter 4 next to find out what happens due to this situation
 
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